第十五期有奖写作练习(1个威望)

deltoid

A person gave me the life and love-- my father.

    I am intimate with my mother when i am a child,When i grow up i also is intimate with my mother, but in the heart most will be attached to the person has actually become the father. Is attached to father that kind of since birth dignity and the affection, the feeling which attachment father relies his hands... ... Because, father's palm always warm.
  
   My father is a strong man with optimism attitude, although the father formerly has received  many tribulation. I always cannot read father's this firmly resource from where, until it recalls  me again 60 year ago that winter. Grandfather  forever left paternal grandmother when the father has not been born then. In  that soldier hurried age, Japanese's bomber aircraft fly on our top of the head , paternal grandmother has given birth to the father. Paternal grandmother and the father mutually walks arm in arm chillily clear is getting by, but said regarding the father, soon raids or the dark night. On also left in father seven year-old time paternal grandmother he, like the dusk throws down a piece of fallen leaf, calmly has taken away father's only possessing. Father in 20 year old of before probably has not eaten has sated the appetite. Sends in the elder brothers and his wives family's father, always all idle, the busy farming season then arrives features help, the slack farming season then helps elder brother the elder brother's wife to make the fragrance, again selects more than 100 catties fragrances, walks several mile Lu Daozhen to sell, one day also can make the very good several cents money. Father's stature certainly not tall and strong, perhaps is precisely the young time shoulder pole presses many reasons excessively.

   Father likes studying very much, also very assiduous, because he knew studies the opportunity is hard-won. Father depends on own both hands to make the school expense; Depends on an own pair of foot, walks to study more than 200 miles roads to the county seat; Depends on own strong, is being optimistic and is diligently recommended for admission to school the state-run Wuhan University math department. I often can remember the people of father's generation misery life, thought his that generation of person exerts the struggle in the misery tenaciousness. Even if is such life, Father also felt satisfies very much, only because he is faces the life by the mature point of view, instead to heavy center time feels with ease.
  
   Father although bad less expresses, actually is the sentimental plain person. Once in very long period of time, father liked in my mind solemn and the remote statue. Until one time, I had discovered  father pays attention to my looking. That is on me junior middle school's time, because my family is far away to the school, therefore is sends in the school. After father  get off work every day transfers the very good several vehicles, comes to the school to see me. But he always all does not let me realize that, only is stands outside the classroom penetrates in the gate the small window to have a look me. Saw me earnestly to study then calmly goes back. Then, also did not know has continued long period of time. Until one day me to walk the god to look at the entrance, actually had discovered a pair of good familiar good kind eye is looking at me, that is not precisely my father. Suddenly, I realized the father to my attention. Really did not know is the father not good at telling table, or mythis makes daughter's feeling to go to extremes slowly. After that, I then often can thin put out this section of memory thin to taste, aftertaste.

  I knew, even if I have been able express the sentiment perfectly at present, also  cannot write my father fully. When I haven’t my child, I do not have the qualifications to appraise my father, I do not have that sincere sense of responsibility. I also  knew he remains for me is not the official career main road or great wealth family property, but a  mood which actually is unyielding disposition and helps others do well which benefits me all life. Father gives my love is very trivial, is trivial sufficiently fills up my entire memory. 27 years time already unconsciously slides from the fingertip, cannot be flushed by the year only has the father to mine love. Along with the age growth, along with increasing which whets, I had a deeper understanding to father's concept. The father's love is different with the maternal love, the father's love is such tenacity and the deepness. The father likes just like cup of strong tea, it may protect against the cold, and may stimulate when sleepy.

tsfrank

So many dreams I have ever made, now little trail can be found. Time may be the killer of them. How cruel it is. I can't help but thinking the song flowers shadow in water, which sang by Tanyonglin. A profound truth can be gotten from the fair-sounding song with such beautiful melody, which is how beautiful the flowers shadows are, however, they are only shadows themselves. With the time passing by, your face will be full of wrinkles, your mind will surrender with iron facts, and your dreams will be forgotten, just like the flowers shadows in  water, the are as beautiful as real flowers, however, we can not get the touch feelings of them but to watch them in a dreaming state.
Moreover, happiness is less and less with the dreams vanishing. It is one of the most regretful things in the world in my opinion. But we can not change the fact just like we can not stop the time passing. A great many old dreams have to be erased from our minds, but fewer and fewer new dreams are born. We grow up, we get mature, and we are not naive, so we had better leave most our dreams. We can not say it is right or wrong, but it is a rule of growing. Maybe we are not pleased with it, we can only bear it. So when I found my dreams were disappearing, I just face my true life quietly, without astonishment or sadness. Sometimes I also make some new dreams today, although they will be out of mind soon, they can take some fresh feelings to me. I am glad of them.
I think a man who lead a common life might as well make few dreams but take an actual attitude to life, for we all know, even though your dreams are beautiful enough, life will not change until you begin to act to change it yourself.

sddz

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